Mary Lee has an auditory prompt today, a harp piece. Maybe I will try to post it here later, but I'm late to work right now, so you need to go there and listen.
This week has been hard for me. Early mornings, tons of school work, full, full days and then trying to write poetry at night. When I write, I long for simplicity and clarity. I want to put together a few words or images that say a lot, but I keep ending with these lengthy, wordy messes, which irritate me greatly. But which I don't seem to be able to avoid.
Today, I decided to limit my wordiness by trying something completely different. Earlier this month, I encountered a form that was new to me. Bonnie, who blogs at
blkdrama.wordpress.com is a March slicer. Earlier this month, she posted a poetry form called an arun, which she learned from another slicer, Stacie, who blogs at
girlgriot.wordpress.com. An arun is a fifteen-line poem, written in three sets of five lines. Each set of
five lines follows the same syllable structure: starting with one
syllable and increasing by one (1/2/3/4/5 — 3x).
"Morning Hike"
ears
collect
birds trilling
gravel crunching.
healing mountain voice.
eyes
gather
yellow primrose.
purple columbines.
colors to take home
breathe.
let go.
refocus.
listen to Him.
return to center.
(c) Carol Wilcox, 2013
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"Morning Pond"
Stone
still pond
stone meets pond
ripples spreading
out, out ever out…
sky
water
the two meet
sky and water
Mirror reflecting
Now
we see
reflection
someday, we will
understand fully.
(c) Carol Wilcox, 2013
Diane Mayr is hosting POETRY FRIDAY at
Random Noodling.
I might have a poem about barley
or barges or barrels or bards
I might have a poem about barbeques
But I don't have a poem about barbed wire.
I might have a poem about Barbados
or maybe the Barbary Coast,
Those places with beaches and barnacles
where barbed wire's usually a ghost.
I might write a poem about bargains
or barbells or Barbie or Ken
Perhaps I've a poem about Bar-Bar-bara-Ann
But those barbed wire poems ain't no gems.
I might have a poem about barn burners,
barnstormers, barnyards, or barn doors,
But those poems about barbed wire fences
Are wadded-up trash on the floor.
Poems about barbed wire fences
are poignant or raunchy or wise,
I've written me poems about many ol' things
But barbed wire's one I ain't tried!
(C) Carol Wilcox, 2013