Just last week
I drove sixty miles
through a torrential downpour
and rush hour traffic
to meet you
I cuddled and rocked you
six pounds of pure spunk
all that black hair
"She looks like Elvira,"
said the nurse
and you really kind of did
yesterday
you and I
played water ballet
in pools around the world
spinning and diving
floating on our backs
toes pointed skyward
giggling always giggling
"Again, Auntie Carol,
let's do it again."
and we did
again
and again
and again
this morning
you, newly graduated,
Baylor's marketing student of the year
will get on a plane
and move across the country
set up your apartment
make new friends
find a yoga class
then in ten days
you will start your
first adult job
probably making more money
than your teacher auntie
has ever made
Godspeed, dear girl, godspeed…
8 comments:
What a poignant poem, Carol. Oh those years do fly, don't they? She is beautiful, and sounds like a wonderful niece too. I wish her well!
Such a sweet post! I love your references to time. It really does go so fast!
Blink and time has gone by, you've shown this in your poem. Congrats to the grad! What an exciting time of life for her.
This poem gave me the goosebumps. "Just last week..." oh, so true, isn't it?? What a beautiful tribute to a beautiful young lady! Godspeed, indeed.
This is beautifully written and brings a tug of my heart… wonderful
This is a five Kleenex poem, Carol. So sweet...and congratulations!
What a gift. I hope you sent it to her.
What a lovely poem - you captured wonderful sensory details - the torrential downpour, water ballet with toes pointed skyward giggling, the rapid movement of time. Something tells me she'll be moving farther away from Aunt Carol.
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