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Wednesday, December 16, 2015

TANKA (#16)



"The Day After a Snow Day"

Leaving coffee, book 
Comfy sweats, snoring dogs, warmth
I brave frigid morning
Vowing to be grateful
for yesterday's brief respite

(C) Carol Wilcox, 2015



Revised on the way to work…

"The Day After a Snow Day"

Leaving steaming cup,  half-read book 
Comfy sweats, snoring dogs, 
I brave frigid morning
Vowing to be grateful
for yesterday's brief respite

(C) Carol Wilcox, 2015

2 comments:

  1. You've captured it perfectly, Carol. The kids will be ready to share their snow days today too.

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  2. Love that steaming cup and half read book! You conjure up snow days from my past. Rare for us, but always a delightful treat!

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