Interspersed with simply enjoying poetry, I try to teach our tough, inner city ten year olds, a little about poetry. I talk to them about the purposes poetry plays in my life. I talk about how poetry makes me see the world in very different ways, and about how it helps me take time to stop and savor and celebrate life's little goodnesses. And about how I hope it will do that for them too…
A couple of weeks ago, around Earth Day, I shared Takayo Noda's DEAR WORLD, which is one of my favorite books. I wrote a couple of poems, then the kids wrote. I thought, in honor of the very special poetry journey we have taken this year, that I would share a little of their writing…
I like when
you breeze
and make me
feel clean.
I like when you
move trees for
the trees not
to stay still
and not hide
their smell.
I like when
you pass by me
even if you’re
invisible
you are just
a dream.
*******
Dear Rain
I like how you clean the streets. | | |
| I don’t like how you bring sorrow and greyness | |
I like how you bring the sound of a pen dropping. | | |
| I don’t like how you make it dark around the city. | |
I like how you’re so clear like glass. | | |
| I don’t like how you make me stay in. | |
**********
Dear Rain
I love
when you
come down
Sweet and
soft round
and round.
Dear Rain
will you keep
coming down?
Dear Rain
I love
your puddle
I want
to jump in it.
Dear Rain
I love
when you
come down.
**********
Dear Lemon
I love when
you grow and
you show your
sport your yellow.
I love when
you make us
buy you at
the store.
I love when
I cut you
open to make
soft good lemonade.
I love when
you put lemon
juice on my salmon
you make it
so, so good
for me to eat.
*********
Dear Spring,
The way you
show up right out
of winter like
an unexpected
guest.
How you
come and I
become mature
more and more
every day.
How you make
sun shine and
snow melt
You’re the perfect dream
Spring.
***************
Dear Soil,
I love when you
give a home
to insects.
I love when you
turn into mud
and worms come
to say, “Hello.”
I love your color
nice and brown.
I love how you
make my plants grow
and give them nutrients.
I don’t love
when you get me dirty
and my clothes too.
************
Dear Snow
I love when
you’re there and cold.
I love when
you’re always there
so I can have
snow fights.
I love when you’re there
so I can make money.
I don’t love
when you’re
always wet.
************
Dear Rain,
I love it
when you clear
the pollen
out of the air.
I love it
when you make
the bugs
go back to their homes.
I don’t love it
when you make
the cats
run away.
**************
Dear Grass,
I love how you
cool me down on
a hot day.
I love how you shine
when you’re wet.
I love how you
surround the trees.
I love how you
reflect the morning
light.
Dear Dog
I love the way you
come and wake me
up in the morning
for school.
I love the way
you come lay
at the door
until I get home
from school.
I love the way
you come
and cuddle with me
in the bed
at night.
POETRY FRIDAY IS AT JAMA RATTIGAN'S ALPHABET SOUP.
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This is one of my top ten must have books. If I were going to teach on an island, it's one of the books that I would take in my bag! Thanks for sharing with us.
ReplyDeleteWow, tell the wonderful bunch of kids who wrote these poems: Great job!
ReplyDeleteLaura Evans
Beautiful poems. Looks like a book I must have.
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