tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post2861882852902382910..comments2024-02-17T21:40:24.532-07:00Comments on Carol's Corner: SLICE OF LIFECarolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13294455230627182656noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-89862262436431300812012-02-22T08:12:29.400-07:002012-02-22T08:12:29.400-07:00I just love how you wrote this! A conversation of ...I just love how you wrote this! A conversation of sorts with your feelings between snippets of words. That Doritos bag and ka-ching. Wow, you inspired me today!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06761503687979849137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-3177478309631407692012-02-21T18:46:26.376-07:002012-02-21T18:46:26.376-07:00Ah-those silent years. I feel for you, but then t...Ah-those silent years. I feel for you, but then they are doing things, have plans & that's a good thing. Now if they would only speak, as in conversation. If it's any consolation, it does get better, promise. I like that you wrote this in a poem, 'ka-ching, ka-ching'.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-78764954061532498672012-02-21T18:44:21.256-07:002012-02-21T18:44:21.256-07:00This is the essence of slice of life writing, Caro...This is the essence of slice of life writing, Carol. I love this piece because it includes humor, sarcasm, longing, conversation, description, and so much more. <br /><br />And yes, the credit card will be needed for the new sneakers. <br /><br />Finally, I really liked the cracks about the Doritos bag being a serving for your son. That helped me envision, along with the size 16 shoe reference, what he looks like.Stacey Shubitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17903206728640184043noreply@blogger.com