tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post2819609202882331432..comments2024-02-17T21:40:24.532-07:00Comments on Carol's Corner: DAY #2: PLEASE COME BACK SOON...Carolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13294455230627182656noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-18538448052513400692022-03-03T10:44:02.606-07:002022-03-03T10:44:02.606-07:00Oh, this is a big slice, and very well written. It...Oh, this is a big slice, and very well written. It carried the past, included strong emotions and finished with a promising note. Terjehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15343845162490388219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-43686494166440780452022-03-02T20:30:47.493-07:002022-03-02T20:30:47.493-07:00Carol - I love that there was a great moment of pe...Carol - I love that there was a great moment of peace between you. I hope R will visit again - she knows she is welcome.Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18102939630771341497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-89680803387287718112022-03-02T20:20:02.657-07:002022-03-02T20:20:02.657-07:00This was well written. You had the right balance b...This was well written. You had the right balance between dialogue, description, and internal thoughts. The tone of the piece really came through-maybe a little regret, a little forgiveness, and a little longing. It touched me and I want to know if she does come back soon. Thank you for sharing.yogalithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12280796584258527495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-41070816761131756132022-03-02T20:18:47.202-07:002022-03-02T20:18:47.202-07:00It would have been difficult for me to understand ...It would have been difficult for me to understand the complexity of your relationship with this woman had you not included all that context. Your recollection of how she left allowed me to better understand your reaction in her return. What a lovely piece. Do you believer her when she says she will be back?Joyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07812801624800801725noreply@blogger.com