tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post8949023842501109433..comments2024-02-17T21:40:24.532-07:00Comments on Carol's Corner: POEM #25- Censored. Carolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13294455230627182656noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-85496867242041329412018-04-27T04:30:47.116-06:002018-04-27T04:30:47.116-06:00You are the consummate storyteller-in-poem-form. D...You are the consummate storyteller-in-poem-form. Don't ever doubt yourself. (You gave yourself good advice about that book!!)Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-2428917082268035062018-04-26T15:23:27.312-06:002018-04-26T15:23:27.312-06:00Love reading your foray into forbidden territory a...Love reading your foray into forbidden territory and the choice you made that it wasn't right for you. Did you ever go back to it? I don't do scary!Ramonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15929914252480696798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-8947790880529584232018-04-26T14:55:13.749-06:002018-04-26T14:55:13.749-06:00I tried a shardoma earlier in the month too--and g...I tried a shardoma earlier in the month too--and got nowhere. Seemed so simple when I wrote down the rules. Just couldn't get it to work when I started playing with it. I love your story poems, and this one brings back so many memories of books I tried to read that were just too much for me at the time I was reading them! Elisabeth Ellingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00747914394861199796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-42780316086178696122018-04-26T03:15:53.525-06:002018-04-26T03:15:53.525-06:00First of all, poetry month always brings to my att...First of all, poetry month always brings to my attention forms that are new to me. Today it was the shardoma. I'm going to have to dig into this a bit. Carol, I think I'm a little partial to your story poems. I loved the way the first stanza told the story of the two mothers and then the second the kids walking in on a conversation about a book. There is something enticing about something we aren't supposed to do or have or read. I had to smile at the end when the narrator censors herself. I still do that. Cathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08233792477358685156noreply@blogger.com