tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post1302245998924066424..comments2024-02-17T21:40:24.532-07:00Comments on Carol's Corner: SLICE OF LIFECarolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13294455230627182656noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-45033090734316595702013-12-25T07:29:37.504-07:002013-12-25T07:29:37.504-07:00I can so identify. I'm the random person who ...I can so identify. I'm the random person who lives with some linear folks. They struggle to understand me, but it's easy to recognize myself in your story! Merry Christmas, Carol.Ramonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15929914252480696798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-91211243565771138412013-12-24T14:20:48.016-07:002013-12-24T14:20:48.016-07:00You had me worried too. Glad it turned out alright...You had me worried too. Glad it turned out alright. But you left me wondering, how was the trip to the airport and how long did you have to wait for your friends? Merry Christmas Carol!elsiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-20501597259521475662013-12-24T12:47:37.130-07:002013-12-24T12:47:37.130-07:00I loved the way your piece started with lots of sh...I loved the way your piece started with lots of short sentences. The middle had varied sentence lengths as where the end seemed to have more short ones. The way you modified your sentence lengths really helped with the pacing of this story. Very artfully done, Carol.Stacey Shubitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17903206728640184043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7724394291330902141.post-34136822667195868172013-12-24T09:31:58.749-07:002013-12-24T09:31:58.749-07:00You really had me worried. That black SUV was a bi...You really had me worried. That black SUV was a bit scary. Love how you took me step by step through this moment. <br /><br />Life is random. It is good to pay attention to it's randomness sometimes, no matter what those linear folks say.<br /><br />Julieannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08876141420632207823noreply@blogger.com